I agree with what others have said, this is your best work on Newgrounds. After watching it again, I still think it's really funny, and it's sad to see that it got a low score considering how good it was.

It's really cool to see something so good which was made by such a few people. The acting was good, without considering a couple of points when I felt like you didn't know what to say next, maybe you had a hard time learning your lines? Or maybe it's just me, I don't know.

You did a great job with the quality. 10.5MB is really low considering how good it was. After having watched this movie on another website, I thought that the quality would be much worse here, but it was quite a surprise to know that it wasn't bad.

It was pretty funny too. There were a good amount of jokes from beginning to end making this really enjoyable to watch. Some of those were hilarious, especially the thing about ninjas and cowboys.

My favorite part was when you were narrating the story, and at the same time it was happening. It was pretty funny and you did a great work with it.

I'm voting 10/10, I hope the score gets higher with time because as I said, this is underrated.

You see, the animation is good, as well as the voice acting, but I feel like the flash is too random.

You certainly showed potential, I think you could animate something good if you wanted too, but you need a good storyline (as this one was a bit weak). I'm saying this because it was too random (the fire popped out of nowhere, and the end doesn't make any sense).

As I said, the animation was good. The voice acting was good too and the syncing was well done, though the music should have started before.

Overall it's not bad at all, and you have potential, I think you could make something great in the future :)

As other people have said, you have improved :) It's nice to see you followed some of the advices people gave you in the previous flash.

The animation was good, and the sounds and music you used were good too. The subtitle bar was a good idea in my opinion, it's aesthetically better.

I think there isn't any flaw on this movie, but the only bad thing is that I think that the "camping" scene was a bit random and unrelated. Other than that everything was good.

Also I see you're planning to use voices on the next part. I strongly encourage to do so because it will make it much better ;)

...Really entertaining.

The song was great, I liked all of it. The beginning was good, but I feel like the silence in 0:13 is too long. Maybe making it a second shorter would be a good idea. It's just my opinion though.

During the song, I found some moments where it felt a little repetitive. It wasn't through all the song, only a few moments, but overall I you added some variation which is good. Also, Tetris at 0:28. I wonder if you really thought about it while you were making it, but I liked that part (which is also repeated later).

I also liked the ending, and the way it got slower when it was finishing, it was a good way to finish the song.

My score is 5/5 and 9/10. Good work!

This got over 50 listens, but doesn't have any review, weird. Anyway, I'm here to leave some kind of review, so that's what I'll do ;)

I really liked this, and enjoyed it as some of your other songs. I say "some" because I haven't listened to all of your audio, but I'm pretty sure you have other great works which I haven't listened to yet.

I liked the intro, it was cool. And the main song was very good, although it was mainly the same thing going on, you managed to make it so it wasn't repetitive. And finally I liked the ending too, which was great.

I'll give you a 5/5 and a 9/10, I hope you keep making good thinks like this :)

You did a great job with this, I also think the name you chose for the song is good.

Also the category "ambient" is great for this song. I could be doing something else while listening to this song without letting it distract me, and I wouldn't have to pay attention at all at this to enjoy it.

I loved how quiet and relaxing it was, and all the sounds you used were perfect. You deserve a 5/5, and a 10/10.