Score: 10

"This is underrated :("

submission: The Movie Movie

date: August 3, 2009

I agree with what others have said, this is your best work on Newgrounds. After watching it again, I still think it's really funny, and it's sad to see that it got a low score considering how good it was.

It's really cool to see something so good which was made by such a few people. The acting was good, without considering a couple of points when I felt like you didn't know what to say next, maybe you had a hard time learning your lines? Or maybe it's just me, I don't know.

You did a great job with the quality. 10.5MB is really low considering how good it was. After having watched this movie on another website, I thought that the quality would be much worse here, but it was quite a surprise to know that it wasn't bad.

It was pretty funny too. There were a good amount of jokes from beginning to end making this really enjoyable to watch. Some of those were hilarious, especially the thing about ninjas and cowboys.

My favorite part was when you were narrating the story, and at the same time it was happening. It was pretty funny and you did a great work with it.

I'm voting 10/10, I hope the score gets higher with time because as I said, this is underrated.

Score: 5

"Could be improved"

submission: The Perfect Morning

date: June 12, 2009

You see, the animation is good, as well as the voice acting, but I feel like the flash is too random.

You certainly showed potential, I think you could animate something good if you wanted too, but you need a good storyline (as this one was a bit weak). I'm saying this because it was too random (the fire popped out of nowhere, and the end doesn't make any sense).

As I said, the animation was good. The voice acting was good too and the syncing was well done, though the music should have started before.

Overall it's not bad at all, and you have potential, I think you could make something great in the future :)

Score: 8

"Good job"

submission: Generic Sprite Flash: 2

date: June 11, 2009

As other people have said, you have improved :) It's nice to see you followed some of the advices people gave you in the previous flash.

The animation was good, and the sounds and music you used were good too. The subtitle bar was a good idea in my opinion, it's aesthetically better.

I think there isn't any flaw on this movie, but the only bad thing is that I think that the "camping" scene was a bit random and unrelated. Other than that everything was good.

Also I see you're planning to use voices on the next part. I strongly encourage to do so because it will make it much better ;)

Score: 5

"Could have been better."

submission: Desmond in the lucky 13

date: April 13, 2009

The movie was so-so. It wasn't bad, but it wasn't really good either.

One of the things I liked the most was the style of the drawings, I always like this kind of movies that look like they are drawn and colored in paper. In this case you combined two styles, the one I just mentioned, and normal flash drawings/animations. In my opinion this doesn't look good at all, I think you should either draw the whole flash in one way or it may look a bit odd.

The music's quality wasn't very good, I'd say it was the worst thing of this flash. Even if someone chooses the right music, it can be ruined if the quality isn't good, because it's something essential. What can I say... At least there WAS music.

And then the story. It wasn't too complicated, but at least it was well executed. But I expected it to be longer, because it doesn't really explain why the number 13 was missing and sold out everywhere.

Overall I think you got talent, maybe if you get a good plot and follow some of the aforementioned tips you could make something great.
3/5
5/10

Score: 7

"Generic review"

submission: Generic Sprite Flash: 1

date: April 11, 2009

If this is your first sprite movie then let me tell you that you did a great job. I'm not onto the Zelda series, in fact I never played a Zelda game, so maybe I can't make a great review, but I'll try it out.

I don't know where to start... Oh yeah, the beginning... In the first scene there was a typo, when link says "What am I suppose...", I think it should be "supposed". I think that was the only mistake I saw on the flash, and it's not even that important.

The music you chose for this flash was cool and went along with it, it matched the scenes so I guess that's a good thing.

Also, sometimes (only sometimes) I had the feeling that the characters were slow, but again, I haven't played the videogames so I can't say anything about this. Anyway, I never felt it was so slow that it was boring, so you shouldn't worry about that.

So I think that's all, I wrote this review as honestly as I could, though I'm not a big fan of sprites. The movie was good, so I voted 3/5, and my score is 7/10.

Score: 7

"lol"

submission: How to steal a flash-TUT

date: November 10, 2008

When I first saw your flash I looked at the title, and the genre which is "informative"... I was wondering who would actually submit something when he knows it's illegal.

Then I decided to watch the flash which actually looked serious, and finally I saw it, and I really lol'd. Great work.

The idea is good and original, but the bad points of this flash are it's length (I guess there wasn't any other way to make it) and the voice acting, which wasn't good at all. And when I say that I mean about the quality, because it was still funny.

The artwork/animation in the face was OK, it could have been better, but it wasn't bad either. Maybe making it more similar to the Angry face would be a good idea. And the shoop da woop thing was just crazy, I think it's the first time I ever laugh at it.

So, to sum up, although the art/length weren't very good, you managed to make something funny, congrats for it.
My score: 7/10

Score: 10

"Superb"

submission: Khronos

date: October 24, 2008

From the first moment I saw this, it caught my attention. The icon looked good and it made me thing the game was going to be good too, fortunately I wasn't disappointed.

The intro was good, nice to see the game has a plot line. My complain about this is that it was a bit difficult to read it because it was very quick. A voice acting in this part would be great, although it's not necessary.

The graphics were great, in the intro, menu and the game itself, it was outstanding. I really loved the menu, it's just great.

The gameplay was good too. There was a high variety of moves which actually made the combos great, there was many combinations to choose from. The attacks were superb, they were very violent, especially the special (duh) attack. The way the enemies died was good too. I feel that "mild violence" is not enough.

The game had a good replay value, I just HAD to keep playing to unlock every character, and some awards were difficult to guess.

The sounds and music were great, they were well chosen and the quality was good too.

This is an awesome game, I kept coming back to unlock achievements and stuff, and I'm still playing after that. You created something great, keep it up.
5/5 10/10

Score: 10

"Great use of sticks!"

submission: FW:

date: October 19, 2008

I've seen many people saying that stick are bad, and any movie that uses sticks is bad too. However, there ARE good stick movies, and this one is an example of it.

The animation was perfect, it ran very smooth, although it was a bit graphic-intensive at some moments. I like to see someone using sticks in such a masterful way, every moment from the beginning until the end it was very intense and entertaining.

The sounds were great, and the music was excellent for this movie, it action-themed and intense just like the movie itself.

Maybe a background story would be good... It's not completely necessary though.

I really think you deserve 5/5 and this 10/10, keep it up!

Score: 7

"Addictive..."

submission: Pi-R Action

date: October 11, 2008

This was a nice game, it kept me playing for a while, because although it's pretty simple and not the most original idea ever, it was pretty addictive.

The graphics were simple and easy and made the game easy to understand. I mean that it was very hard to confuse one type of ball with another. In games like this it's OK to keep it simple because later it will become more laggy if you have a lot of balls with weird graphics.

I liked the HUD, or whatever you call the placed it said your score. Again was simple, easy to look at, and at the same time it didn't distract you from the main game. Same for the quality and sound buttons.

The collision detection was good. I often find games that could possibly be very fun but are screwed up with bad hit tests. So congrats for this :)

Maybe more types of enemies which move in a different way (like more randomly) would be good.

I liked the fact that the game saved your score so you can come back later to beat your score. And I think that was the main thing that made this so addictive, because you always want to achieve a higher score. A high score table would be appreciated, so you could compete against other people.

The music was good, it was entertaining and fun to listen while you're playing. It was a good idea to include the mute button because many people like listening to their own music.

So, I'm voting 7/10, it was fun, well done, and addictive. It makes people go back later to beat their high score, this is a strong point.
I'd like to see more enemies, and a high score table if you ever make a second part.

Keep it up :)

Score: 4

"Simple"

submission: Blue Driving Game

date: October 6, 2008

That's how I'd define your name in one word. The game has potential, you just have to add things to it to make it more complete and interesting.

First of all, you should name your game with something better that "Blue Driving Game", these kind of things give your game more personality.

The graphics were nothing too new, I mean, they were just OK. Still, it would be good to have an animation when the care crashes against the red... Thing.

The hand brake wasn't good at all, I mean, it should make the car go slower instead of just stopping it. It made the game extremely easy in those parts when you're on the gray things which accelerates you.

It would be nice to have some music, if you ever make a new version of this game, I really think you should include this. If you do, a mute button would be great, since some players like listening to their own music :)

Adding different kind of obstacles could be a good idea. You could also include some kind of power-ups (go faster, etc).

Another feature which would be great is a timer. Then you could also add a highscore table so players would compete to finish the game faster and faster.

Other sounds would be awesome too, I mean, sound when you break, accelerate, etc.

Remember to add a preloader if you make a game with a bigger file size, even if it's a bit small it could cause problems in computers with slow connections.

I'll give you a 4/10 and a 2/5.
:)